You say "presentable" like it is just barely able to be shown I say wow. I like the lighting, pose, and the way you can tell it pains him to think about it without knowing the story through to rose cutting his hand.
This is gorgeous. All the details such as his hair, the creases in his shirt and the background are simply perfect. The colours you've used are wonderful too with the rainbow effect on the brick and across the sky. The colouring is really soft too on his skin and clothing and it really does look beautiful. An absolutely wonderful piece~